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Friday, August 14, 2009

Attempt to write a story 1.

Synopsis:
This is a story about two brothers, who's parents were brutally murdered by the local mafias, having to survive with their wits and cunning in New York. Their brotherhood got tested when a woman gets in their way, threatening to destroy the close bonds they built up over the years.

Reviews:
"A story about love, loyalty and betrayal, with some twists along the way."

"The brotherly love was well written. Unexpected twist at the end."


Chapter 1:

"When's the consignments due to arrive, boss?"

"11th November, New York harbor."

"Affirmative. I will be there to track it down 10 days later."

"Don't act recklessly, Agent K. Act only after I have given the green light and do not blow your cover. I repeat do not blow your cover!"

"...."

"Damn, what a bloody rude subordinate, always ending the conversation abruptly. Hope that he had fully apprehended the message before hanging up the call. Geez."

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To be continued.